English SEXXY Paragraph

In English, we have been watching The Power-One were we had to write a group paragraph with the SEXXY structure. Here is what we did.

S: The director uses a long shot to show sergeant Borman looking at Geel Piet.
E: For example, in the long shot we see sergeant Borman is being suspicious because he has his baton by his side so you get the feeling that Geel Piet is going to be in trouble.
X: The director does this because it shows us that the sergeant knows something is off and thinks it is because of Geel Piet.
X: The effect on the audience is that they feel a sense of danger for Geel Piet because they know he has done something wrong and that he will be in trouble and the audience doesn’t want him to be in trouble.
Y: We get the same feeling of danger when Geel Piet is telling sergeant Borman what the song means before he dies.